Monday afternoon came around as Liz came storming through the subway gates. She had spent the past two hours shopping at a sale from her favorite store. If she didn't start running she knew she would miss her subway and be late to work. Quickly, she begins to push through the turn-wheel. Just as she did so, she realized that she left half of her bags in the taxi she used on the way over. She couldn't believe it! Wishing she could turn around and run back to the car where hundreds of dollars of merchandise was sitting, she just had to keep forward. Now that her day was ruined, she took refuge in the fact that she wouldn't be late to work and get fired. as she came moping into her office, her boss ran in telling her he had a huge project and had she been any later he would have given it to her partner. Liz knew she could really use a raise so she took the opportunity of this project to ask her boss if she was applicable. Her boss quickly complied and rushed off to his next assignment. Her day wasn't too bad after all.
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3 comments:
Hi,
Really cute story. I love the way it started sad and ended happy, despite the fact that she lost allll of her new clothes. Just make sure you use capitalization.
I liked you story, I like how you put emotions in the sotry so we could relate to her. One suggestion capitalize your words silly!
& comment mine please?
:D<3
Very good story. I liked the fact that the story fit your personality. Maybe expand a little more in the end.
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